The setting of this game set me up to be wary of all options...I'm glad I didn't decide to swim the first time around. I loved each part of the story, especially the ending. It made it more fulfilling after dying so many times. I was curious and went back for the rest of the dialogue and they were all great! I agree with previous feedback on grammar, spelling, etc. One thing I noticed was that the character's name and 'You' interchanged often, or wasn't present at all. But these things weren't too noticeable while playing. Nice work! (:
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The setting of this game set me up to be wary of all options...I'm glad I didn't decide to swim the first time around. I loved each part of the story, especially the ending. It made it more fulfilling after dying so many times. I was curious and went back for the rest of the dialogue and they were all great! I agree with previous feedback on grammar, spelling, etc. One thing I noticed was that the character's name and 'You' interchanged often, or wasn't present at all. But these things weren't too noticeable while playing. Nice work! (:
Thanks Mek!
Thanks for the feedback, always appreciated.